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Writing for the Skim

How to structure marketing copy so the readers who skim still get the message.

Most marketing-page readers don't read. They skim. Eye-tracking studies, attention metrics, our own session recordings — all confirm it. People land, they look for the thing they need, they're gone.

This isn't a problem to fight. It's a constraint to design around. The structure that works:

  • A headline that promises something specific.
  • One paragraph that delivers the promise, in short sentences.
  • Three bullet points that recap. (You're reading them right now.)
  • A single, unambiguous call to action.

That's it. Everything else is decoration. If your copy doesn't survive the skim test, no amount of clever rewriting will save it — you need to restructure.